Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Limitation on final project

 Along making the video, we have no problem at all in finishing the it and we have cooperation and some misunderstanding among our group but manage to find a way to solve it. Although we have been running into some trouble such to find a place to act and during investigating the place we got chase by hornets and I almost drown. We did not suffer much as 4 members including me had been stung during investigating the place. We were lucky enough to find this place as it is very suitable for the project. The name of the place is Timpango, Sugud, Penampang located within the village of Sugud.

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Television effect on children
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Negatif effect of television on children
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         i.            Immitation of act from their favourite cartoon
       ii.            Watchcing adult rated movie
      iii.            Violence
     iv.            Turning them from a good child to bad
Television can have some bad effect to children and parents need to monitor their childrens acts everytime
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   Television can effect children in many ways, there are some good and some bad. Most kids nowadays have bad behaviour because of television. The immitation of bad acts on television from a favourite cartoon and such and practice such as kicking and punching of siblings while they are role playing their favourite cartoon characters. Watching adult rated movie is some of the reason why there are increasing numbers of crime of kids getting pregnant because of this influence. The violence and hardcore action style movie influnce young kids in getting involve in fights and getting disciplinary action in school and involve in gang fights. Thus, this makes the influence of television turning some kids from good to bad. In conclusion, television can be harmful to young minds and so parents have to monitor their children and if  should they can block channels that contain violence and other harmful aspect that can  influece a young mind.

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Smoking cigarretes
Topic sentence
Smoking cigarretes does more harm than good
Supporting details
         i.            Illness such as cancer
       ii.            Bad breath
      iii.            Bad habit(influence/waste)
     iv.            Out of breath
       v.            Addiction to smoking
Cigarrettes smoke brings harm to the human body and can cause health problems
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    Smoking cigarretes has more disadvantage and does more harm than good. For example, cigarretes can cause illness such as cancer. Although this fact has already been proven, some would still continue doing so and leads the smokers to have bad breath as an effect from the cigarretes smoke. In addition to health problems, there are some who are suffering from asthma involve with this and this would make them even more out of breath. Smoking can develop a bad habit for example, people who is already into smoking would influenced other to join them it can be either their friends or family. In addition to the bad habit, people who is into smoking would spend RM 10 on buying one or more boxes of cigarrete for themselves and it is wasting money. To some, smoking is considered as an addiction like drugs and some cannot stop themselves not to smoke and it is believe that there are chemicals within the cigarrete that is causing them unable to stop. In conclusion, smoking cigarretes prove to be harmful and addictive to the human body and can cause health problems if they continue.  

Love language

 After watching the video on love language, I found out people who are in love does not care on appearance and  how they dressed. its more on feeling on what they share and when they have those feeling anything can happen. In watching this video, I watched as the young man started the conversation not with words but through passing notes with the lady and by the looks of it I can tell that the man have a feeling towards the lady and interested to getting to know her.
 After further watching the video, I found that their relationship became more friendlier and they meet every time at the park and passing notes to each other. Since the first day the man saw this lady, she's been putting her headphones and this man has been curious on what is she hearing and so the man gather all his courage and wrote a note to ask what is she listening, the lady gave her the earphone to listen but the man hears nothing. The lady explain to the man through hand signals and the man understood on what she says. The lady thought the man was disappointed but instead the man wrote another letter and tell her that he still love her.
  People nowadays always look on appearance and riches of other people, but after watching the video, I was touched to see that all people in the world has someone special for them just like this kind of situation.